Saturday, June 15, 2013

Words - A Haiku Trial..

Verse , rhyme I wait for
Why do they take so much time?
From a (writer's) block away.


My first trial  at Haiku. Not even sure if I got my syllables right.. :)

4 comments:

  1. :) Good attempt. The last line... well, should have five syllables.
    5-7-5 , syllables, usually, not words.
    (Sorry for the info overload :D; put it down to the Teacher in me :D)

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  2. Thanks.. I wasn't really sure..Will fix it in the next one..May be I can avoid the bracketed (Writers) and it will fit.

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